帮我修改这篇英语作文帮我看看我的这篇文章哪些地方有错误,语法错误什么都帮我改过来,或者有更好的写法也告诉我~weird dreamI had Two dreams yesterday.one is about my grandfather,the other one is about my gr
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![帮我修改这篇英语作文帮我看看我的这篇文章哪些地方有错误,语法错误什么都帮我改过来,或者有更好的写法也告诉我~weird dreamI had Two dreams yesterday.one is about my grandfather,the other one is about my gr](/uploads/image/z/5989873-49-3.jpg?t=%E5%B8%AE%E6%88%91%E4%BF%AE%E6%94%B9%E8%BF%99%E7%AF%87%E8%8B%B1%E8%AF%AD%E4%BD%9C%E6%96%87%E5%B8%AE%E6%88%91%E7%9C%8B%E7%9C%8B%E6%88%91%E7%9A%84%E8%BF%99%E7%AF%87%E6%96%87%E7%AB%A0%E5%93%AA%E4%BA%9B%E5%9C%B0%E6%96%B9%E6%9C%89%E9%94%99%E8%AF%AF%2C%E8%AF%AD%E6%B3%95%E9%94%99%E8%AF%AF%E4%BB%80%E4%B9%88%E9%83%BD%E5%B8%AE%E6%88%91%E6%94%B9%E8%BF%87%E6%9D%A5%2C%E6%88%96%E8%80%85%E6%9C%89%E6%9B%B4%E5%A5%BD%E7%9A%84%E5%86%99%E6%B3%95%E4%B9%9F%E5%91%8A%E8%AF%89%E6%88%91%7Eweird+dreamI+had+Two+dreams+yesterday.one+is+about+my+grandfather%2Cthe+other+one+is+about+my+gr)
帮我修改这篇英语作文帮我看看我的这篇文章哪些地方有错误,语法错误什么都帮我改过来,或者有更好的写法也告诉我~weird dreamI had Two dreams yesterday.one is about my grandfather,the other one is about my gr
帮我修改这篇英语作文
帮我看看我的这篇文章哪些地方有错误,语法错误什么都帮我改过来,或者有更好的写法也告诉我~
weird dream
I had Two dreams yesterday.
one is about my grandfather,the other one is about my grandmather.
I dreamed that my grandfather planed a war,and my whole family struggled in the war with a lot of bad people.though I didn't know why they were bad .
Then I found my father in a dark room,and someone hide there who was going to shoot him .I tried my best to remind my father that he was in danger,at the same time I get three kettles nearby ,in order to hit the bad man.
Fortunately it worked.
Finally we defeated them.
Then I dreamed that there has something happened on my grandmother.
so I must do something for her.such as making meals and washing clothes.
I felt a lot of love when I did anything for her,as she never want me to be tired .
I waked up in the morning ,felt sorry for them,and thought about what I can do for my grandparents in the real world.
帮我修改这篇英语作文帮我看看我的这篇文章哪些地方有错误,语法错误什么都帮我改过来,或者有更好的写法也告诉我~weird dreamI had Two dreams yesterday.one is about my grandfather,the other one is about my gr
很好啊,但是语句不通,分段不够好,写作文时要用心,反复修改不必要的不须写.
没有什么文章啊
很正确呀、