请英文好的朋友帮我看看简历有没有语法错误什么的,Working Experience2006.11~2008.03 Shanghai Ganowell Trading Co.,Ltd Position:Sales assistantThe sales system list,the relation delivers goods coordinated Help sales manager contact
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请英文好的朋友帮我看看简历有没有语法错误什么的,Working Experience2006.11~2008.03 Shanghai Ganowell Trading Co.,Ltd Position:Sales assistantThe sales system list,the relation delivers goods coordinated Help sales manager contact
请英文好的朋友帮我看看简历有没有语法错误什么的,
Working Experience
2006.11~2008.03 Shanghai Ganowell Trading Co.,Ltd
Position:Sales assistant
The sales system list,the relation delivers goods coordinated
Help sales manager contacts the customer to processing selling operation
File consolidation
The reason of demission:company
2008.03~2010.12 Shanghai Fangdi Hotel
Position:Reception supervistor
Check-in
Cashier
Help manager to arrange the department to work
Statistics render an account
The reason of demission:company
Education & Training Background
2008.03~2010.07 Shanghai Television University Business English (Major in) junior college
2011~now Shanghai Television University Business English (Major in) under graduate(reading)
Skills
general English conversation
office automation
请英文好的朋友帮我看看简历有没有语法错误什么的,Working Experience2006.11~2008.03 Shanghai Ganowell Trading Co.,Ltd Position:Sales assistantThe sales system list,the relation delivers goods coordinated Help sales manager contact
第5行:contacts的s去掉
第7行:the reason of 的 of 改成 for
第12行:Help manager to arrange the department to work 中 to 去掉,department不能和work搭配
第14行:the reason of 的 of 改成 for
个人经历中很多表达不是很地道,因为不知道你想要表达什么意思.
!~不懂,嗯哈。。。