请问我写的句子有错么 怎么改的更好点~I cannot be convinced that it will has much connection with NW for earning a profit from a store in Plainesville.it指另一件事,想要表达 我不相信 it和NW从商店中获利 有什么必
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请问我写的句子有错么 怎么改的更好点~I cannot be convinced that it will has much connection with NW for earning a profit from a store in Plainesville.it指另一件事,想要表达 我不相信 it和NW从商店中获利 有什么必
请问我写的句子有错么 怎么改的更好点~
I cannot be convinced that it will has much connection with NW for earning a profit from a store in Plainesville.
it指另一件事,想要表达 我不相信 it和NW从商店中获利 有什么必然联系
请问我写的句子有错么 怎么改的更好点~I cannot be convinced that it will has much connection with NW for earning a profit from a store in Plainesville.it指另一件事,想要表达 我不相信 it和NW从商店中获利 有什么必
I cannot be convinced that it will have much connection with NW to earn a profit from a store in Plainesville.
我英文也是一般,整句的意思不是很理解,但看出几个基本语法错误:
1. will have 不是 has;
2.connection 是可数名词,应该是many connections
3. 没有earn a profit之说,profit是不可数名词,你可以说earn lots of money 或 make money.
will have (not has)
what does 'it' refer?
从你的文中看,你好像是说:我不能被人家确信从Plainesville的一个商店获得利润就会与NW有很多的联系。
如果你不是这个意思,就说明你写的不够完善,甚至有错,自己改动吧。
如果你是想说:我不相信从Plainesville的一个商店获得利润就会与NW有很多的联系。
那可以写成:
I do not believe that earning a profit fro...
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从你的文中看,你好像是说:我不能被人家确信从Plainesville的一个商店获得利润就会与NW有很多的联系。
如果你不是这个意思,就说明你写的不够完善,甚至有错,自己改动吧。
如果你是想说:我不相信从Plainesville的一个商店获得利润就会与NW有很多的联系。
那可以写成:
I do not believe that earning a profit from a store in Plainesville will has much connection with NW.
或者你想说:我不相信为了与NW有很多的联系就要从Plainesville的一个商店获得利润。
I do not believe that to have much connection with NW should earning a profit from a store in Plainesville .
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