求帮忙修改作文(指出错误修改即可)假定你是李华.请你给笔友Peter写封信,告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会,带去他想要的那幅中国画,同时询问他是否可以接机.信中还需说明:李明:高
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![求帮忙修改作文(指出错误修改即可)假定你是李华.请你给笔友Peter写封信,告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会,带去他想要的那幅中国画,同时询问他是否可以接机.信中还需说明:李明:高](/uploads/image/z/13844449-1-9.jpg?t=%E6%B1%82%E5%B8%AE%E5%BF%99%E4%BF%AE%E6%94%B9%E4%BD%9C%E6%96%87%28%E6%8C%87%E5%87%BA%E9%94%99%E8%AF%AF%E4%BF%AE%E6%94%B9%E5%8D%B3%E5%8F%AF%29%E5%81%87%E5%AE%9A%E4%BD%A0%E6%98%AF%E6%9D%8E%E5%8D%8E.%E8%AF%B7%E4%BD%A0%E7%BB%99%E7%AC%94%E5%8F%8BPeter%E5%86%99%E5%B0%81%E4%BF%A1%2C%E5%91%8A%E8%AF%89%E4%BB%96%E4%BD%A0%E5%8F%94%E5%8F%94%E6%9D%8E%E6%98%8E%E5%B0%86%E5%8E%BB%E4%BB%96%E6%89%80%E5%9C%A8%E5%9F%8E%E5%B8%82%E5%BC%80%E4%BC%9A%2C%E5%B8%A6%E5%8E%BB%E4%BB%96%E6%83%B3%E8%A6%81%E7%9A%84%E9%82%A3%E5%B9%85%E4%B8%AD%E5%9B%BD%E7%94%BB%2C%E5%90%8C%E6%97%B6%E8%AF%A2%E9%97%AE%E4%BB%96%E6%98%AF%E5%90%A6%E5%8F%AF%E4%BB%A5%E6%8E%A5%E6%9C%BA.%E4%BF%A1%E4%B8%AD%E8%BF%98%E9%9C%80%E8%AF%B4%E6%98%8E%EF%BC%9A%E6%9D%8E%E6%98%8E%EF%BC%9A%E9%AB%98)
求帮忙修改作文(指出错误修改即可)假定你是李华.请你给笔友Peter写封信,告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会,带去他想要的那幅中国画,同时询问他是否可以接机.信中还需说明:李明:高
求帮忙修改作文(指出错误修改即可)
假定你是李华.请你给笔友Peter写封信,告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会,带去他想要的那幅中国画,同时询问他是否可以接机.信中还需说明:
李明:高个子,戴眼镜 航班号:CA985
到达:8月6日上午11:30
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
习作
Dear Peter:
How are you doing?My uncle Li Ming will leave for your citiy to attend a meeting.He will bring the Chinese picuture that you want to have for you.The picutre is very beautiful and I think you must like it.I hope you can pick him up at the airport if you have free time.My uncle is very tall with a pair of glasses.The nember of the airport is CA985.He will arrive at your citiy at 11:30 ,Augest 6.Thank you very much.Please write to me if you have some questions.I will tell you at first time.
Yours
Li hua
求帮忙修改作文(指出错误修改即可)假定你是李华.请你给笔友Peter写封信,告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会,带去他想要的那幅中国画,同时询问他是否可以接机.信中还需说明:李明:高
不才献丑了~修改都用[sample]写了一下..都是文法上的..
Dear Peter:
How are you doing?My uncle Li Ming [will attend a meeting at your city on August].He will [also]bring the Chinese [painting you want for you].The [painting] is very beautiful and I think you [will love] it.I hope you can pick him up at the airport if you [are available].My uncle is very tall [and wears] a pair of glasses.The [flight number] is CA985.He will arrive at [your city airport around]11:30 ,[August] 6.Thank you very much.
[Please write me a reply if you have any question.I will respond as soon as possible]
Yours
Li Hua
你好 He will bring the Chinese picuture that you want to have for you 改为:He will bring you the Chinese picuture that you want. The nember of the airport is CA985 He will arrive at your citiy at 11:30 Please write to me if you have some questions ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 祝你学习进步,更上一层楼! 不明白请及时追问,满意敬请采纳,O(∩_∩)O谢谢~~
改为:The nember of the flight is CA985 (flight 航班)
改为:He will arrive in your citiy at 11:30, on Augest 6th(arrive in + 大地点, arrive at + 小地点,例如 arrive at the airport)
改为:Please write to me if you have any questions (任何问题请联系我,用any)
He will bring the Chinese picuture that you want to have for you.---He will bring the Chinese picture which you want.
The picutre is very beautiful and I think you must like it---will like it
He will arrive at your citiy at 11:30---He will arrive at 11.30
if you have some questions---any