请帮我看看我的这篇英语作文有基本的语法错误吗?并指出不足之处!Why not go to West Hill for a picnic this Sunday Sure!Xiaoxiao and me are going to West Hill for a picnic this Sunday .Xiaoxiao will take something to eat ,such
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请帮我看看我的这篇英语作文有基本的语法错误吗?并指出不足之处!Why not go to West Hill for a picnic this Sunday Sure!Xiaoxiao and me are going to West Hill for a picnic this Sunday .Xiaoxiao will take something to eat ,such
请帮我看看我的这篇英语作文有基本的语法错误吗?并指出不足之处!
Why not go to West Hill for a picnic this Sunday Sure!
Xiaoxiao and me are going to West Hill for a picnic this Sunday .
Xiaoxiao will take something to eat ,such as hamburgers.I like to take something to drink ,such as apple juice .
How nice the picnic was!
请指教!
请问最后一句结尾写什么?表示的意思是 “我想那是一个愉快的野餐!”
请帮我看看我的这篇英语作文有基本的语法错误吗?并指出不足之处!Why not go to West Hill for a picnic this Sunday Sure!Xiaoxiao and me are going to West Hill for a picnic this Sunday .Xiaoxiao will take something to eat ,such
1
时态
一篇文章一种时态.
前面将来时,后面就应该也是将来时
而不能用过去时态was
改为will be
2
短语搭配
携带某物是
take with 不能take直接加某物
Xiaoxiao will take with something to eat
I like to take with something to drink ,such as apple juice
3
习惯用法
such as表列举一般后面都是2个以上,多举一点例子更好啦
对于
like to do 和like doing
并无明显区别大多可以通用
不用改的
如果非要区别既有点苛刻啦
to do强调一次性喜欢
doing 强调一直喜欢
这里一次性或许更好些
故笔者的to do 无误
复杂点的表达That will be a picnic which is full of joy ,I think.
简单的,That will be a very joyful picnic,I think
这一句" I like to take something to drink "改成“I like taking something to drink.”
I think that a very joyful picnic!